Haikus: At Dawn (NC-17 - warnings)
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birdsofshoreTitle: At Dawn
Pairing: Reader's interpretation (m/m)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, possible underage, possible dub-con? I don't even know what happened here.
Summary: Erm. I wrote 11 haikus about incest. Like you do.
A/N: I fail at reading instructions. I started this for a recipient at![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
hd_owlpost and then realised the pairing for all the owlpost gifts was meant to be H/D. Unbetaed. Posting so I didn't totally waste my time. Running away before I regret it.
He's barely awake
when I steal into his bed,
a six a.m. thief.
His breath, slightly sour;
hair, damp and soft. I drink deep:
warm, sleepy, boy-smell.
“Nngh. What's up?” I am,
rubbing against his hip bone
deliciously. “Oh.”
We never speak of
this in the daytime, no. It's
forbidden. Perfect.
I yank his shorts down,
press my nose to his throat and
thrust: quick, desperate.
It doesn't take long;
it can't. They might wake, hear his
breathy, stifled cry.
I clutch his fingers,
inky from schoolwork, with a
ragged nail he's chewed.
Faster now, he moves
under me. He always does...
eventually.
His skin is so... uhhh...
He bites his lip as I come,
coating his stomach.
I love each shiver,
the sweet throb of hot dirty
fuck yes wrong wrong wrong.
Always look after
your brother, said Mum. Man, I'm
going straight to hell.
Pairing: Reader's interpretation (m/m)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, possible underage, possible dub-con? I don't even know what happened here.
Summary: Erm. I wrote 11 haikus about incest. Like you do.
A/N: I fail at reading instructions. I started this for a recipient at
hd_owlpost and then realised the pairing for all the owlpost gifts was meant to be H/D. Unbetaed. Posting so I didn't totally waste my time. Running away before I regret it.He's barely awake
when I steal into his bed,
a six a.m. thief.
His breath, slightly sour;
hair, damp and soft. I drink deep:
warm, sleepy, boy-smell.
“Nngh. What's up?” I am,
rubbing against his hip bone
deliciously. “Oh.”
We never speak of
this in the daytime, no. It's
forbidden. Perfect.
I yank his shorts down,
press my nose to his throat and
thrust: quick, desperate.
It doesn't take long;
it can't. They might wake, hear his
breathy, stifled cry.
I clutch his fingers,
inky from schoolwork, with a
ragged nail he's chewed.
Faster now, he moves
under me. He always does...
eventually.
His skin is so... uhhh...
He bites his lip as I come,
coating his stomach.
I love each shiver,
the sweet throb of hot dirty
fuck yes wrong wrong wrong.
Always look after
your brother, said Mum. Man, I'm
going straight to hell.
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Date: 2013-10-17 08:59 pm (UTC)fjdksljfd
Faster now, he moves
under me. He always does...
eventually.
OMG, so dirtywronghot. Nnnngh.
Um, apparently I can't form complete sentences here. Just grunt at you in satisfaction. Characters going straight to hell is my favorite thing in the world. And damn. That was just downright masterful. *squirms*
ETA: Totally Bill/Charlie to me.
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Date: 2013-10-17 09:08 pm (UTC)I'm glad I left the pairing open :D It's interesting to know how you interpreted it.
Hoo. Well. This was not betaed, so, you were a very nice person to have around when I answered the door in my towel :DD (I still LOVE that analogy).
♥
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Date: 2013-10-17 09:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-17 09:45 pm (UTC)Oooooops :D
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Date: 2013-10-17 09:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-17 09:36 pm (UTC)Thank you for the lovely comment. I thought I was going to go to bed and then wake up in the morning to a complete tumbleweed. And we would all just have to pretend this never happened.
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Date: 2013-10-17 09:51 pm (UTC)LOL @ those warnings.
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Date: 2013-10-17 10:00 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it. I could not possibly confirm or deny your hunch as to the pairing ;-)
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Date: 2013-10-17 10:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-17 10:26 pm (UTC)re: At Dawn
Date: 2013-10-17 10:45 pm (UTC)Re: At Dawn
Date: 2013-10-18 07:02 am (UTC)It might well have been Pottercest I had in mind. Then again, it might not :D
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Date: 2013-10-18 05:14 pm (UTC)I know this was written for HP, but this makes my inner Thor/Loki fangirl happyhappyHAPPY. XD Aesthetically, I especially like the first two stanzas: they do a wonderful job of setting the quiet, surreptitious feeling of the whole piece. ♥ And: "Faster now, he moves / under me. He always does... / eventually."
Beautifully written ♥
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Date: 2013-10-18 05:34 pm (UTC)pervertsafficionados happy :DDDThank you very much for the lovely compliments.
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Date: 2013-10-18 05:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-19 08:19 am (UTC)I never wrote incest before, and I was worried all the incest fans might say 'what is THIS piece of crap?"
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Date: 2013-10-19 08:54 pm (UTC)This would be very welcome at
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Date: 2013-10-21 05:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-11-06 08:45 pm (UTC)THANK YOU!
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Date: 2013-11-06 08:42 pm (UTC)You deserve a parade in your honor.
And there NEEDS to be a smutty haiku comm!!!!!!!!!!! I'd join that in two seconds flat.
This is James/Al, by the way.
Totally James/Al.
;-D
Oh and thank you to
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Date: 2013-11-06 08:53 pm (UTC)And I totally agree with you. That's Pottercest!
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Date: 2013-11-06 11:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-11-06 08:56 pm (UTC)You deserve a parade in your honor.
Get out of here, you're doing it again :DDD You're too sweet.
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Date: 2013-11-06 11:39 pm (UTC);-)
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