I know this was written for HP, but this makes my inner Thor/Loki fangirl happyhappyHAPPY. XD Aesthetically, I especially like the first two stanzas: they do a wonderful job of setting the quiet, surreptitious feeling of the whole piece. ♥ And: "Faster now, he moves / under me. He always does... / eventually."
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Date: 2013-10-18 05:14 pm (UTC)I know this was written for HP, but this makes my inner Thor/Loki fangirl happyhappyHAPPY. XD Aesthetically, I especially like the first two stanzas: they do a wonderful job of setting the quiet, surreptitious feeling of the whole piece. ♥ And: "Faster now, he moves / under me. He always does... / eventually."
Beautifully written ♥