What makes for good dirty talk? (~in fic)
Nov. 18th, 2014 06:59 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
birdsofshoreI had an idea for a story and it would probably involve a lot of dirty talking and general filthiness. Then I realised that this is something I really struggle with.
What, in your opinion, makes dirty talking hot in fic? Are there things that just don't work for you when you're reading it? What is your favourite kind to read? Have you got a favourite story that involves dirty talk? And, if you're a writer, can you give me any tips? Because I sort of stink at it. I do try, because I know it's great when it works, but I usually fail and have to be bailed out by a beta. I got several compliments on a filthy line in a recent fic and it was actually![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
raitala's doing, LOL.
I even feel awkward READING dirty talk, often, because I'm not always sure how I feel about people calling each other slut and so on, and I'm not fond of porny descriptions of dripping holes. So I basically need a Dirty Talk primer. Can you help? Thank you!
What, in your opinion, makes dirty talking hot in fic? Are there things that just don't work for you when you're reading it? What is your favourite kind to read? Have you got a favourite story that involves dirty talk? And, if you're a writer, can you give me any tips? Because I sort of stink at it. I do try, because I know it's great when it works, but I usually fail and have to be bailed out by a beta. I got several compliments on a filthy line in a recent fic and it was actually
raitala's doing, LOL.I even feel awkward READING dirty talk, often, because I'm not always sure how I feel about people calling each other slut and so on, and I'm not fond of porny descriptions of dripping holes. So I basically need a Dirty Talk primer. Can you help? Thank you!
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Date: 2014-11-18 09:41 pm (UTC)I'm going to pound the farts out of you. Well, what's wrong with THAT?
I so want to slip that into a fic and see what my betas say. Oh, I need to!
We're both going to hell for this. That sounds more than acceptable to me. I'm being serious, now!
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Date: 2014-11-18 09:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-11-18 10:11 pm (UTC)Also, did you see that T-Rex noises are on the positive side of the chart?? :D :D :D
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Date: 2014-11-18 10:16 pm (UTC)I missed that totally
It's the best chart ever. I nearly lost my head and posted it to my (non fandom) facebook page, but I regained control just at the last minute.
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Date: 2014-11-19 01:17 am (UTC)*Ponders*
I suppose, technically speaking, the farts, as pre-farts, are pounded into the poundee, who later releases it as proper farts after the pre-fart generating piston action, ie. the pounding, is removed...
*ponders some more*
:D *Huggles!!!!*
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Date: 2014-11-19 03:08 pm (UTC)