Oh. my. God. This was so awesome! Not only porn but so many feels! I loved it! And you managed to get cross-gen hotness into a Harry/Draco story, you conniving woman!
I love that Harry feels so guilty even though we know that future Draco must have been planning this for some time. After all it already happened to him. But Harry doesn't seem to grasp that, the silly man.
So many great lines, especially this one:
“Fuck, Potter, did you turn up simply to remind me how crap my life is?”
And this whole exchange is golden:
“I know perfectly well that although you think I'm a stupid prat, you also secretly fancy me, and—” “Shut the fuck up, Potter!” “And you think about me, quite a lot in fact, and you—” “That is a load of bullshit and lies—” “And the reason I know all this is because you told me this yourself, shortly after we got together, and I also know that you wank over me quite frequently, and—” I've got my wand drawn, now, and pointing at his stupid, smug face. “And I think that's so fucking hot, Draco."
They're both so perfectly in character and the dialogue is just so revealing of who they both are.
But the sex! I can't even tell you. It's exactly what I love the most. First times! Preparation! (oh yummy yummy) Dominance! I'm just a lovely pile of goo :)
Thank you, THANK YOU. This is such a great way to start my birthday!!!
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Date: 2015-06-02 02:47 pm (UTC)I love that Harry feels so guilty even though we know that future Draco must have been planning this for some time. After all it already happened to him. But Harry doesn't seem to grasp that, the silly man.
So many great lines, especially this one:
And this whole exchange is golden:
They're both so perfectly in character and the dialogue is just so revealing of who they both are.
But the sex! I can't even tell you. It's exactly what I love the most. First times! Preparation! (oh yummy yummy) Dominance! I'm just a lovely pile of goo :)
Thank you, THANK YOU. This is such a great way to start my birthday!!!