Okay, if you had asked me before I read this if one more fic of "just" Albus wanking it over Mr Malfoy would be too much, I'd have said yes.
And I'd have been dead wrong!
I'm sooooooo happy you wrote this!!! Because:
1. The Mirror -- and all of Albus' corresponding self-esteem issues and his coming around to seeing himself as beautiful. Just perfect. And this story actually *needed* that. Albus needed to get a glimpse of what Draco sees when he's fucking him, and that was just a glorious moment.
2. Fuck Machine Dildo -- because COME ON. I could probably read 20k of that right there. :-DDD
3. Mr Malfoy -- Prae and Caligari said it below. He's remarkable. I love that you've created this Draco that lives as his own character in Albus' mind (but also really IS all these things he imagines) and is just this legendary thing, you know?
4. ALBUS -- you've just got this kid nailed. I adore him. I love the journey he takes mentally and emotionally in this and how that prepares him and us for the next story. We're pining and hurting right along with him, and yes, I believe I said I would *kill* you if they weren't in the same room at least in the next installment, but I do see that merely hurting is better, because death means no more Draco/Al from you, and that's just not okay.
This story is way more brilliant than it has any right to be. LOL! This shouldn't work. But it really does. Brava!
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Date: 2015-03-24 02:42 pm (UTC)And I'd have been dead wrong!
I'm sooooooo happy you wrote this!!! Because:
1. The Mirror -- and all of Albus' corresponding self-esteem issues and his coming around to seeing himself as beautiful. Just perfect. And this story actually *needed* that. Albus needed to get a glimpse of what Draco sees when he's fucking him, and that was just a glorious moment.
2. Fuck Machine Dildo -- because COME ON. I could probably read 20k of that right there. :-DDD
3. Mr Malfoy -- Prae and Caligari said it below. He's remarkable. I love that you've created this Draco that lives as his own character in Albus' mind (but also really IS all these things he imagines) and is just this legendary thing, you know?
4. ALBUS -- you've just got this kid nailed. I adore him. I love the journey he takes mentally and emotionally in this and how that prepares him and us for the next story. We're pining and hurting right along with him, and yes, I believe I said I would *kill* you if they weren't in the same room at least in the next installment, but I do see that merely hurting is better, because death means no more Draco/Al from you, and that's just not okay.
This story is way more brilliant than it has any right to be. LOL! This shouldn't work. But it really does. Brava!