Ah, I guessed editor. I probably knew that already, did I? But my memory is so shoddy.
That's really interesting, punctuation, wow. I don't really know what 'framing sentences' would mean, but this is so interesting. Ok, yes, I admit it, I can literally not think of anything else other than my dialogue now. O_o
So, do you mean like this?:
“Draco Malfoy?” McGonagall looked over her glasses at Harry. “You'll find him in the Forbidden Forest.”
How would someone else do it? I am so clueless about writing that it's not funny. Every time I write a fic and people don't actively laugh and point, I feel total relief that I got away with it again ;)
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Date: 2015-01-10 09:37 pm (UTC)That's really interesting, punctuation, wow. I don't really know what 'framing sentences' would mean, but this is so interesting. Ok, yes, I admit it, I can literally not think of anything else other than my dialogue now. O_o
So, do you mean like this?:
“Draco Malfoy?” McGonagall looked over her glasses at Harry. “You'll find him in the Forbidden Forest.”
How would someone else do it? I am so clueless about writing that it's not funny. Every time I write a fic and people don't actively laugh and point, I feel total relief that I got away with it again ;)