Oh my fucking god. That was... That was absolutely fucking brilliant, I just- God, I don't know if I will be able to convey exactly how much I've loved this story.
This is absolutely fucking perfect, and I've drunk every single word of it. More than that, I think I'll go back and read it again because the way you write them it's just- God.
First, the characterisation. Just like Vaysh said, it's so fucking perfect. It's absolutely wonderful how you've managed to write a Draco that's so close to canon, it's amazing. This is exactly how I picture him when I imagine him older. This is my headcanon older Draco, definitely. He's just perfect. Like everybody else. It's funny because I think it's the first time I read a Draco/AS fic where I don't even have a hint of regret for him not having anything to do with Harry. Not one second.
Second, I am completely blown away by your descriptions, both the physical ones - the great details in the setting, the robes, the buttons, the differences in formal ones and more modern ones, the way you played with them, Draco being naked under them and so on, it was all so wonderful! - and the way your characters felt. It's not easy to be inside a 17 year old boy's head and you've managed that brilliantly. The way you show us how they feel, it's absolutely stunning.
Third, the story. Because of course, you do know that this will have to have a sequel, and god the story was oh so perfect. I love that it's Harry who interrupts them, even though I hate him somehow for breaking such a wonderfully tender moment. I love the dynamics between all the characters, and especially Draco and Albus. I am fucking in love with this verse, and what you created here, and in awe of your talent once again.
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Date: 2014-11-29 12:23 pm (UTC)This is absolutely fucking perfect, and I've drunk every single word of it. More than that, I think I'll go back and read it again because the way you write them it's just- God.
First, the characterisation. Just like Vaysh said, it's so fucking perfect. It's absolutely wonderful how you've managed to write a Draco that's so close to canon, it's amazing. This is exactly how I picture him when I imagine him older. This is my headcanon older Draco, definitely. He's just perfect. Like everybody else. It's funny because I think it's the first time I read a Draco/AS fic where I don't even have a hint of regret for him not having anything to do with Harry. Not one second.
Second, I am completely blown away by your descriptions, both the physical ones - the great details in the setting, the robes, the buttons, the differences in formal ones and more modern ones, the way you played with them, Draco being naked under them and so on, it was all so wonderful! - and the way your characters felt. It's not easy to be inside a 17 year old boy's head and you've managed that brilliantly. The way you show us how they feel, it's absolutely stunning.
Third, the story. Because of course, you do know that this will have to have a sequel, and god the story was oh so perfect. I love that it's Harry who interrupts them, even though I hate him somehow for breaking such a wonderfully tender moment. I love the dynamics between all the characters, and especially Draco and Albus. I am fucking in love with this verse, and what you created here, and in awe of your talent once again.
Thank you, thank you, thank you. ♥