I am sort of a less is more person. A few well-placed, well-delivered lines--with the appropriate reaction from the other person, as others have said--works so much better for me than endless dialogue.
I do also agree that one man's kink seems to be another man's squick. I think if you are forcing yourself to write something you don't really like, it's going to be hard for it to come across well. So skip the "slut" and dripping holes stuff and keep it simple.
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Date: 2014-11-18 08:21 pm (UTC)I do also agree that one man's kink seems to be another man's squick. I think if you are forcing yourself to write something you don't really like, it's going to be hard for it to come across well. So skip the "slut" and dripping holes stuff and keep it simple.