Oh! What a fantastic way to tell this story. I love your narrator, her matter-of-factness about it all, the added element of voyeurism. She makes the orgy sound so friendly, all She could see why he was able to defeat He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named and A very considerate neighbour, Harry Potter, with the cheeky winking and the genteel waving. This was delightful and fun and surprisingly moving, and I'm ever so glad for Dorothy that she's got such a pleasant view. (Also, perhaps, a bit jealous. Can't remember I saw "orgy view" in the real estate listings.)
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Date: 2014-07-10 04:55 pm (UTC)