Ohhh, I love it. I love your OC (and I am incredibly jealous of Dorothy's view). Hahah, I loved the little gems of humour in there: completely undaunted by splinters and Teddy having his clothes peeled off by so many pairs of hands, all that lovely determination and simply bags of energy (<3333), and omg when she gives Harry that little wave XD I could just see it. Brilliant.
And then, oh, you broke my heart a little bit with Dorothy's reminiscences of lost opportunities, I'm glad she's getting her vicarious thrills at least. Also, I wouldn't mind moving in to a guest room, if there's one going spare...
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Date: 2014-07-10 01:55 pm (UTC)And then, oh, you broke my heart a little bit with Dorothy's reminiscences of lost opportunities, I'm glad she's getting her vicarious thrills at least. Also, I wouldn't mind moving in to a guest room, if there's one going spare...