I love it! Ungh at the gloves and the boots and cuffs... and the balloon. And I love love love the way that Draco is indeed happy and exuberant, and Harry and the glowering. You have such a talent for capturing both their voices, my dear, I always feel seduced alongside them. I feel Draco's pull to corrupt Harry just a little, and Harry's answering semi-secret desire to be corrupted. Just a little. There's desire and a lazy dancing around each other and humour all wrapped up in it. You've done it all through dialogue only and yet I could see the scene so perfectly. Bravo, you.
And I shall finish by dribbling a little here, again, at the idea of the gloves.
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Date: 2014-06-05 04:54 pm (UTC)And I shall finish by dribbling a little here, again, at the idea of the gloves.
:D
edited as I can't spell, lol