Oh, you! I have never had anything written for me before, did you know that? I think that this is the perfect first thing, and I am entirely flattered that you decided I needed something beautiful. Thank you. It is beautiful, and calls to mind other of my favourite poems (such as 'Beatrix is Three' by Adrian Mitchell): there is something so magical about the juxtaposition of shared love for a child, the way a lover takes your breath away, and of course the wonder of the fireworks.
I am trying to pick out my favourite lines, but I love all of this so much. I think the last five stanzas moved me the most, but the whole thing has a wonderful flow and rhythm to it, and I love it. Thank you so very, very much! ♥ ♥ ♥
Now I really better get on with doing your betaing! ;)
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Date: 2012-11-04 08:11 pm (UTC)I am trying to pick out my favourite lines, but I love all of this so much. I think the last five stanzas moved me the most, but the whole thing has a wonderful flow and rhythm to it, and I love it. Thank you so very, very much! ♥ ♥ ♥
Now I really better get on with doing your betaing! ;)