Uh, this was lovely- Your descriptions were just so dead on, they had a wonderful, visceral kind of a feel to them which really suited the scene. The whole thing was rather sharp, kind fo cold, but by no means detached. Draco and Harry were both so very THERE throughout the whole thing, and I loved that you had Harry remain so very defiant, it made his submission in the end all the better.
It was such a lovely idea for a gift, no doubt you've done the artwork proud :)
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Date: 2014-03-07 11:47 pm (UTC)Your descriptions were just so dead on, they had a wonderful, visceral kind of a feel to them which really suited the scene.
The whole thing was rather sharp, kind fo cold, but by no means detached. Draco and Harry were both so very THERE throughout the whole thing, and I loved that you had Harry remain so very defiant, it made his submission in the end all the better.
It was such a lovely idea for a gift, no doubt you've done the artwork proud :)