I love how Draco is a shit to Scorpius but isn't absolutely terribly evil - like I wouldn't call him a bad father, though the lines are blurry, erm, considering - but he's definitely a bit cruel. But there's without a doubt a lot of love there, too, and I like it when that comes through. Blergh. So wonderful. Although, all that stuff aside... I really, really like it when he's a bit cruel too. AHEM. I like it quite a lot. Such a pushover. But dear lord do I love it.
Don't get me started talking about the smut. I'll never stop. That blow job? Nooo. No, no. Yes. Yesnoyesnoyesnoyes. I can't get over it. I had to literally fan myself earlier today when thinking about it. It was mostly for show, because I am prone to dramatics at times, but ohhh holy hell. Sharing. Yes, the sharing. The wonderful sharing. Share more. More of that, please. The way Albus was losing it from going back and forth. THE PRAISE? And when Draco guided Al's head down Scorpius' cock? Yep, no, that's it. I was a goner. How I ever survived this fic is beyond me.
I love how Albus started out having more time with each of them first, and then towards the end he was moving - or rather, being moved most of the time (uggh help) - between them more frantically. All three were kind of gravitating towards each other too, or at least to Albus, and Albus wanted them SO MUCH. He couldn't get enough. It wasn't enough. And then yesss, both at once. AND THE TOUCHING - you know the one - and the coming apart and just plain coming, and Scorpius coming over them both - JUST A LITTLE - but still both. IT COUNTS. What was with THAT detail? Oh god, so much capslock. PLEASE.
This whole fic left me even more invested than before in the progression of whatever it is they have together.
The arm grabbing when they came undone, too. Sweet holy Earth that was incredible, the way Draco held Scorpius up. Just the fact that he needed to be held up at all! And then Albus being so gone afterwards I shit you not I almost lost my mind, but especially the arm grabbing and holding him up and I just - oh my god everything about their relationship is so fucked up and yet there's still some sort of boundary and I just-- how? Why what ughlfhldhlh
The angst is great, honestly. Because WOW my feelings were all over the place. And that's both good and bad, I suppose, yes. Hmm. Yes, angst is good, I say, as long as it's not permanent? But hurting them along the way could be, erm, fun? Yes, plenty of fun if you were to break them just a little. And then have them piece each other together again. Maybe. Maybe just a little breaking? Oh, god, I'm cruel. But the potential there?? The emotional impact of some drama? DELICIOUS. Oh god, but I don't want them completely devastated.
"Albus and how susceptible he is. And he really, really wants them both so bad and wants to make it so good for them. so dreamy with wanting vacations for them and just-- uggh." YES, SELF. Good note. Yes. I love so much.
The dynamics, overall. That fine balance between lust and love and in what way they all feel it, and how, and towards whom. It's all so interesting and painful and sweet. I loved how you explored that more here.
Oh, and how Draco pushed Scorpius away - literally at one point - and then invited him back. Always toeing that line. I was so frustrated with him at times and then properly angry, but then I felt like, "Oh, okay, that's acceptable then." The next moment I was simply resigned. Then thrilled, then back to frustrated and even a little confused. I felt sympathetic towards all of them at one point or another but I couldn't decide who earned most of my sympathy, or even for what reasons. This whole series leaves me SO confused.
Draco is such an ass. :D I am more hysterical than happy!! :D This is my hysterical face. :D He's such a shit and I want to slap him in the face and then kiss him and slap him again and beyond that I want to have him break down and lose all that control he's so fond of until Albus and Scorpius must be the ones to scoop him up and take care of him and also take care of him. Oh god. What am I even saying.
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Date: 2016-06-17 10:34 pm (UTC)I love how Draco is a shit to Scorpius but isn't absolutely terribly evil - like I wouldn't call him a bad father, though the lines are blurry, erm, considering - but he's definitely a bit cruel. But there's without a doubt a lot of love there, too, and I like it when that comes through. Blergh. So wonderful. Although, all that stuff aside... I really, really like it when he's a bit cruel too. AHEM. I like it quite a lot. Such a pushover. But dear lord do I love it.
Don't get me started talking about the smut. I'll never stop. That blow job? Nooo. No, no. Yes. Yesnoyesnoyesnoyes. I can't get over it. I had to literally fan myself earlier today when thinking about it. It was mostly for show, because I am prone to dramatics at times, but ohhh holy hell. Sharing. Yes, the sharing. The wonderful sharing. Share more. More of that, please. The way Albus was losing it from going back and forth. THE PRAISE? And when Draco guided Al's head down Scorpius' cock? Yep, no, that's it. I was a goner. How I ever survived this fic is beyond me.
I love how Albus started out having more time with each of them first, and then towards the end he was moving - or rather, being moved most of the time (uggh help) - between them more frantically. All three were kind of gravitating towards each other too, or at least to Albus, and Albus wanted them SO MUCH. He couldn't get enough. It wasn't enough. And then yesss, both at once. AND THE TOUCHING - you know the one - and the coming apart and just plain coming, and Scorpius coming over them both - JUST A LITTLE - but still both. IT COUNTS. What was with THAT detail? Oh god, so much capslock. PLEASE.
This whole fic left me even more invested than before in the progression of whatever it is they have together.
The arm grabbing when they came undone, too. Sweet holy Earth that was incredible, the way Draco held Scorpius up. Just the fact that he needed to be held up at all! And then Albus being so gone afterwards I shit you not I almost lost my mind, but especially the arm grabbing and holding him up and I just - oh my god everything about their relationship is so fucked up and yet there's still some sort of boundary and I just-- how? Why what ughlfhldhlh
The angst is great, honestly. Because WOW my feelings were all over the place. And that's both good and bad, I suppose, yes. Hmm. Yes, angst is good, I say, as long as it's not permanent? But hurting them along the way could be, erm, fun? Yes, plenty of fun if you were to break them just a little. And then have them piece each other together again. Maybe. Maybe just a little breaking? Oh, god, I'm cruel. But the potential there?? The emotional impact of some drama? DELICIOUS. Oh god, but I don't want them completely devastated.
"Albus and how susceptible he is. And he really, really wants them both so bad and wants to make it so good for them. so dreamy with wanting vacations for them and just-- uggh." YES, SELF. Good note. Yes. I love so much.
The dynamics, overall. That fine balance between lust and love and in what way they all feel it, and how, and towards whom. It's all so interesting and painful and sweet. I loved how you explored that more here.
Oh, and how Draco pushed Scorpius away - literally at one point - and then invited him back. Always toeing that line. I was so frustrated with him at times and then properly angry, but then I felt like, "Oh, okay, that's acceptable then." The next moment I was simply resigned. Then thrilled, then back to frustrated and even a little confused. I felt sympathetic towards all of them at one point or another but I couldn't decide who earned most of my sympathy, or even for what reasons. This whole series leaves me SO confused.
Draco is such an ass. :D I am more hysterical than happy!! :D This is my hysterical face. :D He's such a shit and I want to slap him in the face and then kiss him and slap him again and beyond that I want to have him break down and lose all that control he's so fond of until Albus and Scorpius must be the ones to scoop him up and take care of him and also take care of him. Oh god. What am I even saying.
I AM SO INVESTED IN THIS UNIVERSE NOW.
Help me. *Whimpers*