omg I'm so happy you like my extreme word vomit lol, I was and remain a mess becasue of this fic.
I'm SO GLAD you love Scorpius and felt cross for Scorpius and want to punch and strangle people for Scorpius. I'm delighted to hear it was so visceral.
omg, honestly, you have done something amazing writing this lad. I was literally fuming at Draco and also like "can you two Malfoys fuck this tension out already jfc". I think it's the combination of the very high emotions in the fic, combined with the first person POV which makes it all feel very immediate, which I think is what makes it kick me in the guts so hard (combined with very excellent writing and pacing and omg the cock-sucking). I wish I had done it hahahaaaaa, still there's always next time.
YOU WOULDN'T! Would you? omg, you totally would! I don't even know anymore!
So then I put some MORE angst in, just a little bit, and then we read it again and we made the ending just that teensy smidge happier. So, I still don't know if we got it quite right, but we did think about it a lot, for what it's worth!
omg, no I think you nailed it, for me anyway. It was perfectly...hmm, resolved? Satisfying, while leaving the reader aware that there is so still more to resolve?
I was overjoyed at the ending, it really was like a huuuuugeeeeee sighhhhhh of reliefffffff, like I was on the edge of my seat, wondering where the hell this was going to land, ending wise (and also, like, really curious about WHERE the cocks would be going into Albus....ahem) and I loved that you did that. Omg, and the cracks are TOTALLY starting to show, and I loved itttttt. Like, you've escalated everything perfectly from Euphoria, and that's why the extra smidge of happiness in the ending works. Like, high stakes, high reward, right? But also high risk....meep!!!
It's soo gooodddddddd *tears hair* *shoves gag into mouth*
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Date: 2016-06-07 01:49 pm (UTC)I'm SO GLAD you love Scorpius and felt cross for Scorpius and want to punch and strangle people for Scorpius. I'm delighted to hear it was so visceral.
omg, honestly, you have done something amazing writing this lad. I was literally fuming at Draco
and also like "can you two Malfoys fuck this tension out already jfc". I think it's the combination of the very high emotions in the fic, combined with the first person POV which makes it all feel very immediate, which I think is what makes it kick me in the guts so hard (combined with very excellent writing and pacing and omg the cock-sucking).I wish I had done it hahahaaaaa, still there's always next time.
YOU WOULDN'T! Would you? omg, you totally would! I don't even know anymore!
So then I put some MORE angst in, just a little bit, and then we read it again and we made the ending just that teensy smidge happier. So, I still don't know if we got it quite right, but we did think about it a lot, for what it's worth!
omg, no I think you nailed it, for me anyway. It was perfectly...hmm, resolved? Satisfying, while leaving the reader aware that there is so still more to resolve?
I was overjoyed at the ending, it really was like a huuuuugeeeeee sighhhhhh of reliefffffff, like I was on the edge of my seat, wondering where the hell this was going to land, ending wise (and also, like, really curious about WHERE the cocks would be going into Albus....ahem) and I loved that you did that. Omg, and the cracks are TOTALLY starting to show, and I loved itttttt. Like, you've escalated everything perfectly from Euphoria, and that's why the extra smidge of happiness in the ending works. Like, high stakes, high reward, right? But also high risk....meep!!!
It's soo gooodddddddd *tears hair* *shoves gag into mouth*