Oh my god. You magnificent bastard. You made me enjoy actual incest. Well, incesty-type things anyway, I'm holding onto a fig leaf as long as father and son don't actually fuck or kiss.
And jesus, that was a 1st person POV festival and you nailed every voice. I love all of them, but especially your Draco, so perfect. Such a selfish asshole. Of course there's an element of narcissism in his enjoyment of this arrangement. Of course!
I loved the turn Scorpius took here, getting a little bit more sharp and assertive. When will he realize that the reason this is hot for him is that he craves his father's approval almost as much as he craves Al? (or am I assuming too much?)
"It doesn't hurt that Albus does look so very like his father, either." No, it doesn't hurt at all, does it, dear Draco? Haha, finally! Like watching your younger self get everything you ever wanted and failed to pursue.
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Date: 2016-06-07 04:45 am (UTC)And jesus, that was a 1st person POV festival and you nailed every voice. I love all of them, but especially your Draco, so perfect. Such a selfish asshole. Of course there's an element of narcissism in his enjoyment of this arrangement. Of course!
I loved the turn Scorpius took here, getting a little bit more sharp and assertive. When will he realize that the reason this is hot for him is that he craves his father's approval almost as much as he craves Al? (or am I assuming too much?)
"It doesn't hurt that Albus does look so very like his father, either." No, it doesn't hurt at all, does it, dear Draco? Haha, finally! Like watching your younger self get everything you ever wanted and failed to pursue.