I think I said this exact thing back when I commented on Euphoria. But damn it, Scorpius is worth his weight in gold. That kid owns my heart! :D
You know what I love so much about this? I mean, ASIDE FROM FUCKING EVERYTHING?
Ahem.
I love how visual it is. I can perfectly see them, the way you've written how they feel, beyond the descriptions of what they are wearing (AND I WILL GET TO THAT MISSY) and how they are standing and the HEATED GLANCES, I love that your descriptions took me in and in I way, more than reading I was watching this story unfold.
I'm not sure if that makes sense or what, but I lost myself in the story.
And it's incredible, because it's such a fantastically hot and steamy story, but there are so much that you're showing with your words. I'm amazed, Birds. It's like I experienced this fic.
And fucking hell, what an experienced that was.
I love that you worked with their three povs. I love how different they are in every way.
I love Albus. THIS is such an Albus story. I'm in love with that kid. He's so fucking eager, and I love that he just takes it and gives so much to his Malfoys. And even with all that, the sucking, the begging, all that delicious wanting, there's something (EVERYTHING?!) incredibly shy and sweet about him that makes me, and Draco and Scorpius, love him and not get enough of him.
I fucking love your Draco, woman. Everything about him is sexy and gorgeous. Everything.
There's this part though:
Draco's mouth is a thin line. “You thought what? You thought that you'd tell me what to do in my own bedroom?” He smiles, but it's not at all friendly.
And I nearly died, because, really! Little things like that knock me dead at how well written Draco is and how fucking sexy he is that way.
I love his manipulations. God, I love him so much like this. (All your doing, really because he's such a bastard!)
I love Scorpius, I love him and I ache for him. He loves Albus so much, and I love the way he loves him. I love the way he sees Albus, and you know, I love the way Albus loves him.
I know Al loves and wants them both, in different ways and madly, both of them, but there's something so pure about Albus and Scorpius and I'm amazed how clearly I can see in the middle of this FUCKING FIC THAT IS THE HOTTEST AND FILTHIEST THING EVER.
And oh! Oh my god! I haven't even talked about all the fucking AND THE SUCKING.
I think this is the blowjob scene. I love how it drew on and on, making Al delirious with want, and seeing Draco and Scorpius working him to that point.
I also must mention Albus clothing. I must. I'm not even sure what to say but I have to mention those fucking clothing he was wearing, because, god, it's like he doesn't even know? And there's Scorpius ~drooling and Draco "distracted" and he's so fucking eager and shy.
See? Very visual. :D
*clear throat* So I kind of love this, okay? ;) Yeah. You can say that it worked for me. <33333
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Date: 2016-06-06 01:25 pm (UTC)You know what I love so much about this? I mean, ASIDE FROM FUCKING EVERYTHING?
Ahem.
I love how visual it is. I can perfectly see them, the way you've written how they feel, beyond the descriptions of what they are wearing (AND I WILL GET TO THAT MISSY) and how they are standing and the HEATED GLANCES, I love that your descriptions took me in and in I way, more than reading I was watching this story unfold.
I'm not sure if that makes sense or what, but I lost myself in the story.
And it's incredible, because it's such a fantastically hot and steamy story, but there are so much that you're showing with your words. I'm amazed, Birds. It's like I experienced this fic.
And fucking hell, what an experienced that was.
I love that you worked with their three povs. I love how different they are in every way.
I love Albus. THIS is such an Albus story. I'm in love with that kid. He's so fucking eager, and I love that he just takes it and gives so much to his Malfoys. And even with all that, the sucking, the begging, all that delicious wanting, there's something (EVERYTHING?!) incredibly shy and sweet about him that makes me, and Draco and Scorpius, love him and not get enough of him.
I fucking love your Draco, woman. Everything about him is sexy and gorgeous. Everything.
There's this part though:
Draco's mouth is a thin line. “You thought what? You thought that you'd tell me what to do in my own bedroom?” He smiles, but it's not at all friendly.
And I nearly died, because, really! Little things like that knock me dead at how well written Draco is and how fucking sexy he is that way.
I love his manipulations. God, I love him so much like this. (All your doing, really because he's such a bastard!)
I love Scorpius, I love him and I ache for him. He loves Albus so much, and I love the way he loves him. I love the way he sees Albus, and you know, I love the way Albus loves him.
I know Al loves and wants them both, in different ways and madly, both of them, but there's something so pure about Albus and Scorpius and I'm amazed how clearly I can see in the middle of this FUCKING FIC THAT IS THE HOTTEST AND FILTHIEST THING EVER.
And oh! Oh my god! I haven't even talked about all the fucking AND THE SUCKING.
I think this is the blowjob scene. I love how it drew on and on, making Al delirious with want, and seeing Draco and Scorpius working him to that point.
I also must mention Albus clothing. I must. I'm not even sure what to say but I have to mention those fucking clothing he was wearing, because, god, it's like he doesn't even know? And there's Scorpius ~drooling and Draco "distracted" and he's so fucking eager and shy.
See? Very visual. :D
*clear throat* So I kind of love this, okay? ;) Yeah. You can say that it worked for me. <33333