I'm in the middle of rewriting the OF (again) having finally found a solution to certain plot points that I think will work - and yes I'd love for you to read it. Switching to 1st POV is something I've done a couple of times - Unexpected Turn was originally written 3rd and I was more than halfway through when I realized it *needed* to be 1st. What is odd to me, as a writer, is what brings that need to switch POV. Solder I didn't have a problem doing in 3rd, never felt compelled to switch it. So why those other two stories?
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Date: 2016-05-21 02:10 am (UTC)