It's all going swimmingly and then BAM. I really adored the evolution of Draco's feelings, how in so few words you really managed to capture his sense of loss with Albus's leaving.
Thank goodness you've got that last bit to make everything better! That last line is phenomenal. Gahh, I'm so jealous of people who can write poignant lines to close out fics! :)
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Date: 2016-05-06 02:38 pm (UTC)It's all going swimmingly and then BAM. I really adored the evolution of Draco's feelings, how in so few words you really managed to capture his sense of loss with Albus's leaving.
Thank goodness you've got that last bit to make everything better! That last line is phenomenal. Gahh, I'm so jealous of people who can write poignant lines to close out fics! :)