Haiku: Loved Those of Great Ambition (AS/S, R, 143 words)

[birdsofshore]

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Title: Loved Those of Great Ambition
Author: birdsofshore
Pairing: Albus Severus / Scorpius
Rating: R
Word count: 143
Summary: Scorpius' personal goal for this school year is somewhat unorthodox.
Warnings: Haiku abuse.
A/N: For the Anywhere But the Bed comment fest. Thank you to anemonen for the lovely prompt. I feel I should apologise that it turned out like this, but hopefully someone will write you a proper fic as well!

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Gravy and roast beef
on the table. Under it,
a different dish.

My zip slides downwards;
my flesh rises up to meet
hot, soft, waiting lips.

The hubbub in the
Great Hall: a cloak in which to
hide my sighs of want.

His lips roam slowly,
taking each inch with relish;
a rapt devouring.

“More beef, Albus?” asks
Rose, mistaking my look for
another hunger.

I squirm in my seat,
desperate for friction, yet
scared of getting it.

His mouth is a thing
both beautiful and cruel.
I moan my worship.

“Stomach cramps?” Rose frowns.
I nod and double over,
cursing all Malfoys.

One last blissful suck
and I'm lost, a love-struck fool
keening my release.

Gryffindor Table
at lunch time. He'll be crossing
it off his list now.

Scorpius Malfoy:
arch-fiend with an angel's mouth.
I'm so very fucked.

Comments

[lumosed-quill.livejournal.com]

HOLY SHIT. :-DDDDDDDDDD PERFECTION!

This --

“Stomach cramps?” Rose frowns.
I nod and double over,
cursing all Malfoys.

is where I first dissolved into fits of cackling glee. :-D

Then again at the end!

And still, in the midst of all that laughing, SO HOT OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

FTW, Birds. FTFW. \o/

(That's what Scorpius said!)

[this-bloody-cat.livejournal.com]

Oh, Birds, this is glorious! Oh dear, he's so very fucked indeed x'D

[anemonen.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, omg this is perfect! Naughty Scorpius has a list and all! I can't help but wonder what the rest of the list consists of:D arch-fiend indeed.
Poor Rose -- beef and stomach cramps. Thank you so much, this is great and funny and SO hot ♥

[capitu]

This is fantastic. I Love it.

That ending. THAT ENDING

Gryffindor Table
at lunch time. He'll be crossing
it off his list now.

Scorpius Malfoy:
arch-fiend with an angel's mouth.
I'm so very fucked.

All kinds of perfect. ALL KINDS.

[blithelybonny.livejournal.com]

This is my favorite day in fandom.

Birds, ffs I don't know how you do it. You are consistently awesome.

Naughty Scorpius and his angel mouth, and poor, unsuspecting Albus and his 'stomach cramps'... Guhh, just glorious.

[dicta-contrion.livejournal.com]

“More beef, Albus?” asks
Rose, mistaking my look for
another hunger.

Omg.

This. is. Amazing.
Really birds, it's magical
You've made haikus hot.

[teddyradiator.livejournal.com]

It's not fair - a great prose writer, and now this blinding Haiku series! No one should be this multi-talented. It's indecent. ;)

That was sublime. Dirty Haiku needs to be a recognised art form, like Dirty Limericks, if it hasn't been already. And you are its Master.

[huldrejenta.livejournal.com]

This is all kinds of wonderful ♥

[sophie-french.livejournal.com]

This is great!!! I always admire people who are able to write poetry because I'm completely incapable of doing so but this is brilliant.

I loved to read Al's reactions and Rose wondering what was wrong with him, and of course, a Malfoy is always here to pervert a Potter!!! :P

Thank you! ♥

[themostepotente.livejournal.com]

I lovelovelove that you turned this joyous little smutlet into a haiku ♥

[your-insomnia.livejournal.com]

I am years late with this but just want to say that I absolutely love this! Every line is gold but especially:

Scorpius Malfoy:
arch-fiend with an angel's mouth.
I'm so very fucked.

Poetry, writing, drawing...Woman, is there anything you cannot do?