Fic: Checking Out the Opposition (H/D, NC-17, ~6300)

[birdsofshore]

I'm claiming my hd_remix. I'll admit I found remix a challenge; I felt a bit inhibited about playing with someone else's work, and I couldn't get the fic to start flowing for quite a while. In the end I switched to Draco's POV and then a kinky 6k PWP whooshed out. :DD  I managed to get terribly worried that kjp_013 would loathe it, but the mods were extremely kind in their reassurance, and, yay, kjp_013 was delightful and gracious about it.

So here it is: if you fancy some rather rough Quidditch changing room sex, with added Parselsmut, then please, be my guest!

Author: birdsofshore
Title: Checking Out the Opposition
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Content: (Highlight to view) *initial dub-con, Parselsmut, PWP*
Summary: Harry and Draco seem quite wound up after their latest game of Quidditch. A remix of Opposites , bykjp_013.
Word Count: ~6300
Author's notes: Many thanks to traintracks for the delightful beta job.

Checking Out the Opposition

I also wanted to thank nicevenn for the very detailed and thoughtful remix of Hungry, Famished. I was taken by surprise at how thoroughly nicevenn planted us back in the world of Hungry, this time from Draco's POV, and I loved the additions, especially to the blow job in the shower, and the delicious snippet of Theo at the end. ♥

Thank you again, hd_remix mods, for hosting this fest for us. ♥

Comments

[nicevenn.livejournal.com]

Is there anyone who doesn't fancy rough Quidditch changing room sex? If there is, this fic would surely convert them!

[birdsofshore]

Awww, thank you! It was certainly a joy to write, once I finally got going :D

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

You know, if you put 'parselsmut' in the "warnings", I'll bet you get twice the reads. LOL! You at least need a tag for it. ;-)

\o/

[birdsofshore]

Oh, I'm up for that suggestion! *edits* Thank you!

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

I just consider it absolutely as big a draw as "Quidditch locker room sex" or "dub-con". ;-) :-)

[birdsofshore]

Well, I've littered mentions of it all over the summary and tags, now :D

[eidheann_writes]

Still meltingly hot. *fans self*

[birdsofshore]

Eeee, thank you!

I never did ask you how you guessed me. Or was it that naughty Ines? She is getting TOO GOOD at spotting me!

[eidheann_writes]

The hint of dubcon, Hogwarts era, traintracks beta, plus the sensory descriptions. You just do such tasty sensory descriptions.

You guessed me as well! And I'm pretty sure Ines didn't spill.

[birdsofshore]

That's a lovely compliment: tasty descriptions. ♥ Thank you very much.

I thought traintracks beta would throw people off the scent, LOL! There's no fooling you ;-)

I don't know quite how I got you. I am just getting more of a feel for the voices of people I speak to regularly. Even if they're writing in someone else's voice. Hmm. I don't know. I'm sorry I can't articulate it like you did.

The best one was guessing raitala. She asked for recs from remix, and I spent a while saying, well, I liked this one, but you wouldn't... and this one was good, but you'd hate it, and, ah - THIS ONE - this one, you'll like. And then I suddenly thought, err, because that's the one you wrote, DOH :D

Ines was very good! Well, actually, she was BAD! She lied to me and said she had NO IDEA who that fic was by! And I believed her, the naughty thing :DD

[eidheann_writes]

She was bad! I watched and laughed.

And you thought traintracks would throw off? Really? But you two are so close!

[birdsofshore]

But, but, but - she never betaed for me before! That was meant to be COMPLETELY confusing :DDD

OK, I'm an idiot :D

[eidheann_writes]

♥♥♥

[capitu]

I know! I lied! She laughed at me, "you lied through your teeth to birds." I felt terrible. I really did. :D:D

[birdsofshore]

I'll never trust you again. I was so sure you wouldn't lie, that when I finally worked out it was eidheann, I thought "well she must have managed to keep it a secret from capitu, somehow!"

:DDD

I'm such a Hifflepuff.

e.t.a A Hufflepuff who can't type

[capitu]

I thought my ~manic~ grin was very telling!

XDD = "yes, birds, I know, I know! I can't tell you but I'm dying to!"

[birdsofshore]

I see that NOW. At the time I thought you were just a bit over-excited :DD

[capitu]

You know, when I read this fic and it had such a delicious Intercrural sex, it was like... ~ta dah~ with heavenly music and light over me that said, yes, that's what was missing in my life. :D

Not even joking. ^^

[birdsofshore]

LOLOL. I'm so happy I gave you a heavenly music moment with intercrural. I had no idea they were going to do that - I just got going and Draco told me, no! Don't let him fuck me! I'm scared! And then there we were. :DD

[capitu]

no! Don't let him fuck me! I'm scared!

I suddendenly remembered Troll in the Dungeon LOL

[birdsofshore]

:DD

[capitu]

Awwwwww. Wasn't he the cutest thing? his face!!!!!

[potteresque_ire]

YUM *this fic gives me memories like very, very, delicious, spicy dessert*

[birdsofshore]

Ooh, thank you pie! What a gorgeous compliment!