Oh my gooooood, this premise! This is wonderful, and it made me all giddy. The endless possibilities with this all-knowing Harry, and this sceptic Draco :D
I felt as amused as Harry when he told Draco about Draco’s attraction, smiling, telling Draco was wanking over him, I think I was smiling as much as Harry did. Poor Draco, I don’t know what I find worse for him: being told all these things and feeling ashamed, or having a sodding 19th birthday.
And I LOVE the idea of Draco making brooms, and Harry flying them professionally! That is so perfect. I’ve read fics where Harry makes brooms, but this fits them perfectly.
And oh my God, the kiss!!! So many feelings! You’re shuffling with the dynamics, it almost feels like cross-gen, but then also not, because they’re still Harry and Draco. Very hot and very interesting, and it also feels a tiiiiiny bit like adultery, but also not, because Draco would have known future!Harry would do this, and still would send him back in time. It almost feels like reverse Veritaserum, Harry telling Draco about Draco’s secrets, about what he likes, what Harry will do to him to make him enjoy every second. Lovely.
“Not... wrong. Not.”
YES IT IS :D But it doesn’t matter, because that sex scene is really scorchingly hot.
All right, and holy (or rather: profoundly good) fuck, the ending!!! My heart breaks a little for Draco, but it is also so very beautiful, giving him hope like this. God. Sorry for this incoherent everything, but you just DID things to me and made me FEEL things and chew over dynamics, and I do not entirely know how to formulate it all exactly, except that it is an amazing story, with so many feelings and things packed in relatively so many words. <333333!
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I felt as amused as Harry when he told Draco about Draco’s attraction, smiling, telling Draco was wanking over him, I think I was smiling as much as Harry did. Poor Draco, I don’t know what I find worse for him: being told all these things and feeling ashamed, or having a sodding 19th birthday.
And I LOVE the idea of Draco making brooms, and Harry flying them professionally! That is so perfect. I’ve read fics where Harry makes brooms, but this fits them perfectly.
And oh my God, the kiss!!! So many feelings! You’re shuffling with the dynamics, it almost feels like cross-gen, but then also not, because they’re still Harry and Draco. Very hot and very interesting, and it also feels a tiiiiiny bit like adultery, but also not, because Draco would have known future!Harry would do this, and still would send him back in time. It almost feels like reverse Veritaserum, Harry telling Draco about Draco’s secrets, about what he likes, what Harry will do to him to make him enjoy every second. Lovely.
“Not... wrong. Not.”
YES IT IS :D But it doesn’t matter, because that sex scene is really scorchingly hot.
All right, and holy (or rather: profoundly good) fuck, the ending!!! My heart breaks a little for Draco, but it is also so very beautiful, giving him hope like this. God. Sorry for this incoherent everything, but you just DID things to me and made me FEEL things and chew over dynamics, and I do not entirely know how to formulate it all exactly, except that it is an amazing story, with so many feelings and things packed in relatively so many words. <333333!