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birdsofshore) wrote2014-09-22 06:41 pm
birdsofshore) wrote2014-09-22 06:41 pm
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Fic: Unguarded (Draco/Albus Severus, ~15k, NC-17)
Title: Unguarded
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birdsofshore
Summary: Staying with Scorpius for the first time proves to be more eventful than Albus expected, right from the moment when he walks in on Mr Malfoy shaving.
Pairing(s): Draco/Albus Severus (age 43/17). Brief mention of Harry/Ginny. Mention of past Draco/Astoria.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): Powerplay, talk of cutting with a razor. This makes it sound really angsty – it isn't.
Word Count: ~15300
A/N: I've been looking forward to talking a little more about this fic, purely because I enjoyed writing it so much and found it fascinating how different it felt to other things I was trying to work on beforehand. It really brought home to me the joy that comes from writing something that's going well, as opposed to the drudgery and uncertainty of struggling on with something that simply isn't working. I simply could not leave this fic alone, or vice versa, and I had to make myself stop, because, honestly, it felt like I could have gone on forever.
I feel a little afraid that I will never write anything that feels this way again, nor anything that people liked so much. But, I'm going to try to stop thinking about that and just feel happy that I got such pleasure writing this.
I forgot to give credit in my original A/N to the fabulous website The Art of Manliness. They have some great resources about shaving and I also lifted some of Draco's dialogue and state of mind from their article here.
Straight razor shaving has meditative benefits. It’s a craft that requires you to slow down and really focus on what you’re doing. After a few times of shaving with a straight razor, you just might start to notice yourself entering an incredibly manly zen-like state.
You’ll feel like more of a bad ass. You’ll be shaving with a tool that can double as a lethal weapon. Putting razor-sharp steel next to your throat every morning reminds you that you’re alive.
I also found watching shaving videoscompletely fucking addictive and hot quite inspiring. This one is a favourite of mine. It doesn't hurt at all that the barber is so cute.
And this next one leaves me quite weak at the knees. The guy getting the shave just seems so blissfully into it, and he's so pliant in the female barber's hands, nnngh.
Both of these videos are actually SFW, which is ridiculous, considering how erotic they are (in my admittedly weird opinion :D).
I can also finally say thank you to my lovely betas!lumosed_quill, omi_ohmy and raitala were a joy to work with and so encouraging and helpful. Thank you so much. It was terribly indulgent having 3 betas, but, OMG, fun. ♥
Thank you again togracerene for this wonderful prompt. Shaving kink will never not be irresistible to me and it was perfect for this pairing. ♥
Thank you tovaysh and kitty_fic for running such a stonking little fest! ♥ I think H/D will always be my OTP, but god, this is a seductive second. I adored lumosed_quill's description of DM/ASP as being "the ship for H/D people who are a bit WRONG." :DD
And thank you tocapitu, who guessed my fic and sent me an email consisting entirely of the words "oh my god" written about twenty times :DDDD ♥
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birdsofshoreSummary: Staying with Scorpius for the first time proves to be more eventful than Albus expected, right from the moment when he walks in on Mr Malfoy shaving.
Pairing(s): Draco/Albus Severus (age 43/17). Brief mention of Harry/Ginny. Mention of past Draco/Astoria.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): Powerplay, talk of cutting with a razor. This makes it sound really angsty – it isn't.
Word Count: ~15300
A/N: I've been looking forward to talking a little more about this fic, purely because I enjoyed writing it so much and found it fascinating how different it felt to other things I was trying to work on beforehand. It really brought home to me the joy that comes from writing something that's going well, as opposed to the drudgery and uncertainty of struggling on with something that simply isn't working. I simply could not leave this fic alone, or vice versa, and I had to make myself stop, because, honestly, it felt like I could have gone on forever.
I feel a little afraid that I will never write anything that feels this way again, nor anything that people liked so much. But, I'm going to try to stop thinking about that and just feel happy that I got such pleasure writing this.
I forgot to give credit in my original A/N to the fabulous website The Art of Manliness. They have some great resources about shaving and I also lifted some of Draco's dialogue and state of mind from their article here.
Straight razor shaving has meditative benefits. It’s a craft that requires you to slow down and really focus on what you’re doing. After a few times of shaving with a straight razor, you just might start to notice yourself entering an incredibly manly zen-like state.
You’ll feel like more of a bad ass. You’ll be shaving with a tool that can double as a lethal weapon. Putting razor-sharp steel next to your throat every morning reminds you that you’re alive.
I also found watching shaving videos
And this next one leaves me quite weak at the knees. The guy getting the shave just seems so blissfully into it, and he's so pliant in the female barber's hands, nnngh.
Both of these videos are actually SFW, which is ridiculous, considering how erotic they are (in my admittedly weird opinion :D).
I can also finally say thank you to my lovely betas!
lumosed_quill, omi_ohmy and raitala were a joy to work with and so encouraging and helpful. Thank you so much. It was terribly indulgent having 3 betas, but, OMG, fun. ♥Thank you again to
gracerene for this wonderful prompt. Shaving kink will never not be irresistible to me and it was perfect for this pairing. ♥Thank you to
vaysh and kitty_fic for running such a stonking little fest! ♥ I think H/D will always be my OTP, but god, this is a seductive second. I adored lumosed_quill's description of DM/ASP as being "the ship for H/D people who are a bit WRONG." :DDAnd thank you to
capitu, who guessed my fic and sent me an email consisting entirely of the words "oh my god" written about twenty times :DDDD ♥Unguarded
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Lololol! Oh god no! Nothing but sheer hotness! ♥
Oh, I hadn't seen the rest of the post! :P
I'm really happy that this has made you happy, and I'm sure it'll happen again. Sometimes we struggle and there is always a reason, even if we don't know about it. I've struggled for three long months on my Harrybang and very nearly dropped out, very, very nearly. Until someone pointed out to me what the problem was. It was really eye-opening, plus I've learned some valuable things about writing too.
Do you know what the problem with that fic was?
Anyway, I'm sure these videos are pretty hot, and god, you've managed to describe this act of shaving as incredibly sensual and exciting. It was UST at its best! ♥
The last thing I'll say is that no matter what happens to our fics, the ones we publish and the ones we don't, the important thing is that each and every one of them teach us something. And that's priceless! ♥
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I haven't a clue what was wrong with my bang, other than, it was dull, badly plotted, with a big ensemble cast I couldn't control, H and D didn't really speak to one another for 20k, I didn't know how it was going to end or what it was about, and, errr. Yeah. That kind of thing :D
People offered to look at it and help me fix it but I was too ashamed to let anyone see it at all. I tend to be a messy writer with longer fics - I leave all sorts of gaps and put "insert banter here" and stuff. This was MUCH WORSE. It was like a ragbag. So no-one ever looked at it, and the thought of rewriting even the 20k I had made me want to lose the will to live. Maybe one day, when I've got the hang of this writing lark, I'll come back to it and just fly through it and write it all beautifully. Maybe ;-)
I'm so glad you were able to turn that problem with your bang around! I had something like that once - it just wouldn't come until I switched to Draco POV and then I was off and flying. In fact, switching to Draco POV is usually rhe solution to all my woes. THAT was probably the problem with Bang, LOL. It should have been Draco Bang ;-)
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I've actually had this exact thought about what might have been the issue with your piece! You would kick a Draco Bang's pretty pretty arse!
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I think it could well have been part of the problem... I certainly did have a splurge of Draco once I ditched it. But, then again, it's quite a handy excuse for not managing it, know what I mean? I'm writing Harry POV again quite happily atm.
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Yeah, I think one or the other of them just pipes up more readily here and there, and we all just have to follow that. And when the Draco voice is strong in you, young Jedi, boy the fuck howdy is it STRONG. You've got the strongest Draco voice I've ever read.
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Oh.
♥
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I'm just drooling on my keyboard.
Sorry. :P
*useless comment is useless*
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Anyway, I've had blocks like these and I agree, changing POV often helps. The block I had was different and it was all a question of genre. I mean, I was mixing two different genres and I didn't even know it and I've learned that, well, it's not really possible. Or it is, but I'm not skilled enough to. So once I'd picked what I really wanted to write, I felt liberated and now I'm having great fun. I had no idea it could happen! :)
About your fic being a ragbag, I know other very talented writers who write like this, I mean, out of order and betaing for them has taught me a lot. I admire people who are able to do that, I feel it's really complicated to do but it's helped me realise it's good to focus on what you want to write at the moment, not necessarily what needs to be written in chronological order.
God, I'm going to shut up now because I'm knackered, I've just had drinks with friends and I'm afraid I'm not making any sense tonight, sorry!!! :P
And I hope some day you'll get to write this story! :)