First, it was a great story! I was breathless reading it, I just couldn't stop.
Also, I love personal posts about writing but as I can't see Try's I'll just stick with yours. :)
It's amazing where inspiration comes from, isn't it? An overheard conversation, a half heard song, a piece of art...I am always fascinated by how the different the creative process is for people.
Oh, and when I recced this, my spellchecker insisted dance floor was two words, so take that as you will. *g*